Adult PC Game: Olecramid - The Second Half v0.2 Win/Mac/Apk Archive

I'm OlecramId and I'm making a visual novel called "The Second Half"
This is my first game so I'm open to all constructive feedback that I can get!

Let's talk about why I'm making this game and what I will try to turn it into.
Two years ago, I discovered the adult visual novel world, and it was love at first sight! I always been a big fan of games, but I never knew this type even existed. Since then I played hundreds of them. Of course, I don’t like them all, but all of them teach me something. Now I know exactly what a game must be to entice me.
Great photo quality? Big fan of it! Beautiful women? Of course!! Good animations? Sure! But most importantly, a story that I want to come back to. And to me that is almost 100 percent about the characters. I want to fall in love with them, or at least one of them. I really like and want that type of connection. This is the kind of game I will try to make, and I want you to fall in love with at least one of my characters!

Now, about the game itself. Like I said before, it will be a story driven game. You will have to make some decisions, important ones, not the silly kind lot of games have. Most of these decisions will be about if you want to pursue some girl or not, and in case you do want to, how you will do it. I don’t want at this point to give much away, but I will just say that the game will have multiple endings according to how you played it.

Why try to make a game now? Easy, last year I lost my job. I have a lot of free time now and I really need a source of income. On one hand, this is my way to give something back for all the wonderful games that I played and I loved, and on the other hand try to make a living.

Olecramid - The Second Half v0.2 Win/Mac/Apk Gameplay Preview