Cabin Boy v0.1 by MeanSquare - Adult Sex Game

This is my First attempt at making a game with Twine. I do not even know if my writing is any good so I wanted to upload to gauge the reponses.

V0.1 has the prologue, the intro scenes and the base layout of the ship. There are a few XXX pages so it isn't all dialogue. The theme is a fairly fast male/female (with a dick) change, with some slower mental changes throughout after that. Mostly I want this to be fairly straight to the point as I hate too much grinding.