Porn Game: ShellyFlowers Embrace the inner Sissy version 0.0.2

0.0.2 Version Review
A good move to Sugarcube. Saves now function and there are more working locations which is good progress even though they're mostly superficial right now. For the most part locations are still functionless like the kitchen. The first days before the GF date are still mostly empty, especially if the player avoids the traps or storyhooks (peeping & panty sniffing). You can go to the gym which as far as I can tell does nothing, walk in the park which does nothing, and jerk off to porn on the computer, or waste time. I wasted time those days other than going to the gym. The problem as others have pointed out is that the GF date still assumes that the player character was locked in chastity even though you can avoid peeping or messing with the roommate's underwear. My advice to the dev and any dev is that if you don't want to write other routes then don't give the player options to avoid the story you want to tell. From the GF date the game continues onwards on the locked chastity route. Another issue I had was with the job. No job in this world unless it's full on slavery will force an employee to work for them after signing the employment contract if they refuse to wear the uniform. This is especially true for a waiter job. Is this world supposed to be like our world or are morals, ethics, and law all different like some kind of mirror universe thing? Same deal with the roommates going back on their "deal" (which I never made) which I unironically rolled my eyes reading the generic scenario. It's not a shot at the dev but it seems like all devs of this genre ignore common sense in order to get to the fetish bits which breaks immersion. Over all, I suggest removing the player's ability to skip or avoid the storyhooks, maybe make the events trigger right from the start of the day and figure out a better way to get the player into the generic sissification scenarios that you want to hit. Granted, at that point all interactivity is replaced with click to continue.
0.0.2: I rewrote the entire game, so now it's in the sugar cube format So it now has a save function.

Added: Gym, The Redfoot(Nightclub), University, A few stores in the mall, New characters and a second week of content.
While I kow that the first version was crap the second one is much better, with more content. It's still ligtyears from finished but now it's worth playing.

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